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Colours In You

Poem By: Methelusa
Poetry


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Submitted: Apr 19, 2007    Reads: 45    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


 

Colours in me, colours in you

The colours of everything we do

A mystery heart, a turpentine smile

A ramshackle speech, a crooked dial

Moments forgot, no moments are lost

Rewinding the palette and a groove in your style

Weary old hands and a face that's been gnarled

Wasted by the silver doom

Walking in the winds of June

Colours in Jupiter, with Saturns laments

A rose in the fall, degenerate

Denegrate, in me.

Soulful like wine, in a lilac divine

Lost to the ethers, withered within

Lonely lined coffins, displaying their sins

Velvetine churlish, a coward like me

Seventeen vermin, hung in a tree

Lost in haze, the tripswitch ways

Of damned delight hours, wishful, arcane

Love leave me forever, it's not that I'm lost

A charlatan and harlot

Honey like wrath.

 

 


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Colour me black, for if I am dead I seek to be blue.

Wonderful, wonderful stuff here! Mwuh!

Posted: Apr 19, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks sasquatch cat!

Captivating! Loved it!!
Suse

Posted: Apr 19, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks Susie, i really was off on a tangent on this one!

'Moments forgot, no moments are lost' is really clever, like I drink too much wine and next day the coversations are lost, though it's forgotten, the meanings remain in the heart. 'Soulful like wine, in a lilac divine' Beautiful line, makes me try to imagine...A dark, full bodied red wine in a lilac heaven, that would be soulful. Nice Work here.

Posted: Apr 26, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks Wolf, I'm glad you like some of the imagery I tried, I did have a deeply introspective slant when I wrote this, glad you picked that up!



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