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Poem By: Methelusa
Poetry


Another song, another rhyme, contains strong use of language this time. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 12, 2007    Reads: 52    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


 

If you look away, if you turn around,

Feel the feedback sounds,

In you.

It's every simple day, every single change,

For you.

Distance running miles.

I'll be standing over you,

Standing over you.

Fighting back the years, tell the truth through tears

And shackles.

This will go like this, do the fucking twist,

Looks good.Wipe the blood away,

Fields on fire, make hay.

And i'll be

Standing over you,

Standing over you.

 


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Comments:

Ah, now I get why you shouted "Do the fucking twist!" at me last night... Mucho impressed, young Methelusa. Wicked!

Posted: Mar 13, 2007

Author Comment:

Yeah, twist the night away. Twist rhymes with whist, and that gives me whistfulness, which leads onto another thread idea...



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