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Fields of Passion

Poem By: Methelusa
Poetry


Mills and Boon anyone? I kid you, this my twisted take on the ethers of love. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 3, 2007    Reads: 40    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


We rolled around the fields of passions

And stumbled through the gates of love

Sailed the seas of emotions

We had so much more to give

And more than that to lose.

We grasped our every wish

We could share each others lives

We're the ones who can't be broken

With love forever stolen, from us.

We shout go out with rejection

Then we'd read a thousand minds

We'll tell a million lies

Just to keep them from the door

We wrote a hundred letters

But never said a thing

We walked the millenia miles

But went nowhere everyday

We lost all that we are

And wreaked havoc on our lives

We broke a million hearts

But we can say

We tried.


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Comments:

I think this is fab! (gotta stop saying fab) Check sp on thousand ;) or is it supposed to sound Irish?!

Posted: Apr 3, 2007

Author Comment:

Ha ha, nope. Good call, my typing is dreadful! Thankyou.



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