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Glycerine Lullaby's

Poem By: Methelusa
Poetry


I was bored, so I wrote this. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 30, 2007    Reads: 49    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


I hear the ticking of your clock

I hear the aching in your words

I see the disappearing time

I am the disappearer chimes

I hear the ostentatious youth

I hear the string with which we're bound

I see the blurring of the lines

With those who come within and from without

Just a temporary spark

 A mesmorary look

Just a taker of the taken

And a diamond I am making

I hear the hesistancy of your breath

I hear the winter that it brings

I see the imaginary dreams

Born from your magazine

I hear the emptiness of love

I know the sorrow it may bring

I hear the metronomes soft pitch

I dig the dirt and spread the ash

I see the flower start to bloom

And the futility of it all

I hear deciduous petals fall

I am cocooned within this moment

I don't want to leave at all.


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Comments:

You used my favourite word!! OSTENTATIOUS!! God, that is just such a sexy word...

Excellent work!!!

Posted: May 30, 2007

Author Comment:

Not as sexy as you....in nothing but stockings!

lol at you guys above! Nice one Meth...loved it! Beautiful work my friend:)

Posted: May 30, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks leesah, I wanted to try and use some different images, when i do that I seem to have a stream-of-consciousness thing going. Thankyou.

Get a bloody room you two, lol. Great work Meth. There are many images that flash before the eyes as I read this piece, and damn if some of those words aren't almost undecipherable, lol. Superb

Posted: May 31, 2007

Author Comment:

Ha ha, thanks Dmonik. I'm trying to experiment with different words and images, I'm glad you like some of them. I'll go take a cold shower!



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