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I Just Want

Poem By: Methelusa
Poetry


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Submitted: Apr 3, 2007    Reads: 43    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


I just want to thank you,

For all you gave me, and all you've done.

And I still love you

Purest innocence.

Lost soul of graceful thought

Bleeding heart you shared with all.

Somewhere I am crying

You taught me it's ok to say,

I love you.

And mean it, I really do

Tragedy with tears of guilt,

Cannot tarnish what i feel.

Beat me, you beat me

And I know you please me.

Believe me, i'm leaving

But I love you now,

As i always will

Until the tides are still.

 


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A real struggle within, trying to balance pain and love. It really hurts!

Posted: Apr 3, 2007

Author Comment:

Thankyou, yes that was the feeling I trying to purvey, glad you got it!

Nice. Talking about anyone in particular?! Heh!

Posted: Apr 3, 2007

Author Comment:

I just want a bit part in your life!



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