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If I Ever Could

Poem By: Methelusa
Poetry


Dream of change until it happens, dreams your dream 'til no-one matters, live your life on the wayside roads, until time will drag out into the cold... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 24, 2007    Reads: 74    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


I want to kill you, and i would if I could.

I wanna fuck you, I know you'd make me cum.

I want to taste you, I know how that could feel

I wanna be you, could we make a deal?

I'd like to see you, hanging from a tree

I want to cut you, just to see you bleed

I want to scar you, you never will forget

That I want to breathe you, and get inside your head

Lonely nights, giving up the days.

Fire and ice, and innocence forget

That I wanna scratch you, get under your skin

I want to reach you, to ask where to begin

I've got to nowhere, know where it went wrong

I have to tell you, you have to sing my song.


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Come on then, I'll take you on, slag!
Like it, dark and broody... hang on... you been watching those serial killer documentaries again... Ok, I'm sleeping on the sofa, Dahmer!
But yeh, great!

Posted: May 24, 2007

Author Comment:

You needent worry hunny! Thankyou x

oh my....laughing at Dawn for wanting to sleep on the couch..lol..You really painted a killers picture here

Posted: May 25, 2007

Author Comment:

Ha ha, yeah! It's really about wanting somebody so much, but not getting them, which of course can drive many killers! Thanks for the support.

Trust Dawn, lol. This is great work again. Strange where we draw inspiration from. But yes, I did get the feeling of a sado - masochistic being. Superbly written, tis a shame I'm seeing some of yours and dawns work under different names. Are you becoming multiple persona's, or is somebody pilfering your works? Superb work Dear Brother - In - Law, lol. 5/5

Posted: May 25, 2007

Author Comment:

Ha ha! Many thanks - I think we may be being pilfered, there is only one Methelusa, and only one Dawn. But to be copied is high praise indeed! Glad you like it - off to check fan requests...



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