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Written for the 'Love Is Suicide - by Dawn Prest' soundtrack. It's a song really, maybe loses a bit in translation. View table of contents...
Submitted: Apr 18, 2007 Reads: 42 Comments: 2 Likes: 0
Lovers and Leavers
Steadfast believers
Long gone, to the ethers
Spit from on the ground
Trusters and Cheaters
Naysaying preachers
Circus act weakness
Like a fallen star
Die in my eyes, they all die in my eyes
Die in my eyes,
You will die.
Know this to notice
No one can own it
Drops in the ocean
With a nothing crown
Die in my eyes, they will die in my eyes
Die in my eyes
You will die.
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Great job! love the 'lovers and leavers', trusters and cheaters...clever!
Posted: Apr 18, 2007
I like this, and having read Dawn's 'Love Is Suicide' I think it is perfect! In some way it reminds me of the 'Mad World' Soundtrack. I love 'Die in my eyes, they will die in my eyes Die in my eyes You will die.' Brilliant, Very sad and powerful!
Posted: Apr 26, 2007
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