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Like Father, Like Son

Poem By: Methelusa
Poetry


This is for my parents, both of whom passed away when i was young - I'm not after sympathy, you can take that elsewhere, just giving the way they held themselves throughout some very tough times the dignity it deserves. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 7, 2007    Reads: 51    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   


I'm asleep

Inside your bones

I deny that which you want

To live, alive and love.

I am lying,

within your heart

I dissappear, to reafirm

Your infirmity

Like a flower withers and dies

These little flowers too sad too cry

I live inside a house

Both empty and bereft

And like you've never left

A sickly child,

A mother battles in vain

A father standing tall against his pain

And the creeping darkness in her veins

Both softer, softer still

To stand against, to cure the ill

To swallow down the bitter pill

Still unforgiven.

 

 


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Comments:

I know you're not going for the sympathy angle-I know you too well.
This is a wonderful tribute to them, hun. You know they'd be proud (even if they didn't like me!!)

Posted: Jun 7, 2007

Author Comment:

Nah, they'd like you - but only if you got a job!

Very touching and sincere. I like this piece, as for sympathy, I'm all out, but I will say I kind of know how you feel. As for Dawn, seriously, how could anyone not like her? lol. Beautiful write Dear Brother.

Posted: Jun 8, 2007

Author Comment:

Ha ha, many thanks Dmonik, always appreciated, and thanks for not giving me sympathy!

I'm with Dmonik..very honest and it's beautifully sad. Your plain language is poetically crafted into heavy emotions...one of my favs from you...awesome.

Posted: Jun 8, 2007

Author Comment:

Aww - thanks leesah, y'know, I'm going to get a big head if you keep being nice to me!

Very moving and deeply written. Great piece of writing.

Posted: Jun 9, 2007

Author Comment:

Thankyou - it's the first time I've written about the subject, and possibly the last, I don't like to dwell, besides, choosing a subject and sticking to it doesn't really work for me!



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