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Nihilism Rules, OK.

Poem By: Methelusa
Poetry


I was about to turn of the computer for the evening, but then I decided to write this. It's not great, just a couple of minutes of speed thought - theres a thought eh?! Now to speed to bed. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 12, 2007    Reads: 68    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


 

Have you ever pricked a thorn

To see the blood?

Have you ever solidified a friendship

And let them dry like dirt?

Did you see the sunshine gaze

When the sky at night still stayed ablaze?

Have you ever heard the sound

Of the burgeoning underground?

I give you the sadness

I give you hope

I give you machines of hate

I give you the motor key

I gave the bloodied nose

And a serenity sceptre for the rest of time

And i do.

Have you heard the thunder,

As it cracks beneath our feet

To take you asunder

Like children make believe

I gave the mortal sin

I gave, to give you in

I gave, so frayed and cracked

I gave

So give it back. 


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Comments:

Not bad for a speed write. Always unique, and that is a good thing!

Posted: Jun 12, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks SN - yeah i was just bored, and trying to stave off bed time, because as soon as you hit the pillow, it's time for work. Thankyou.

This made me smile. I liked it.

Posted: Jun 12, 2007

Author Comment:

Thankyou - if you can elicit any response (especially a smile) with your words, thats half the battle! Appreciate the comment.

Wish I could speed write with this intensity. Hell, I wish I could plainly write with thisintensity. Great write, and a pleasure to read. Super work again Dear Brother.

Posted: Jun 13, 2007

Author Comment:

Thankyou very much, as ever I appreciate your support.



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