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Peruvian Flake

Poem By: Methelusa
Poetry


Tags: drugs, love, valentine

Love song for drug users View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 15, 2007    Reads: 46    Comments: 5    Likes: 0   


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In my heart� my valentine

For all I want is out of time

Perhaps our lives are mis-aligned

In my heart my valentine

I tricked myself, it's make believe

Why would you want to love me?

And even though I've been deceived,

My love for you will be the death of me.

'Cos scarlet skies and wayward smiles

Cannot disguise or trick my eyes

So jaded by the time it took

All my life has�been forsook

In my heart my valentine

My love for you shall never die

And even when the words don't rhyme,

You'll always be my valentine.


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"My love for you won't fade. For side y side we shall conquer empires and rest within sweet Isis gaze."

Sweet :)

Posted: Apr 15, 2007

Author Comment:

'Well I married Isis on the 4th day of May, but I could not hold onto her'

5 stars! I can so relate to still loving someone who has stolen my heart. I'm such a softie! Take care, and thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading! ~ :-) ~K

Posted: Apr 15, 2007

Author Comment:

Thankyou very much! I'm glad you liked it, and yes, I think many people can relate to that feeling.

It captures an insight into emotions, I like it.
Nice read. x

Posted: Apr 16, 2007

Author Comment:

Thankyou Tina, i'm glad you picked up on that aspect of it. Many thanks.

I thought this was really well written and dare I say it 'sweet' but also bitter sweet. Me like!

Posted: Apr 16, 2007

Author Comment:

Aww, AG, always appreciated. I was kind of going for bitter sweet, thanks!

'Cos scarlet skies and wayward smiles

Cannot disguise or trick my eyes'
Great line...very lovely
:)

Posted: Apr 16, 2007

Author Comment:

Aww, thanks leesah! Always appreciate your views.



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