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Submitted: Apr 4, 2007 Reads: 42 Comments: 3 Likes: 0
Flicker fade, to shimmer shade
My camera aches for you
Distance miles, moonlit isles
Are ever torn in two
A crystal chime, sudden bell
A silver spark of dust
If i could, I know I would
Knowing that's the curse
I'm a mistake King, and I love nothing
So I dig deeper here with you
Silt and gold, glitter soiled
A canvas blank, that I must spoil
Extinguished flame
Nuerotic gaze, interlocking chains
Distant breaths of truth
If i can't, I'll never try
It's different telling you.
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Ah, I like this one ALOT! 'Flicker fade, to shimmer shade
My camera aches for you'...great line! Awesome poem once again!
Posted: Apr 4, 2007
Yeah, I agree with the one above, I thought they were great lines too, and the flow stayed through out.
Posted: Apr 5, 2007
That flowed really well, great job!
-Just Dead. :3
Posted: Apr 11, 2007
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