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The Dirty Pleasure

Poem By: Methelusa
Poetry


"This gun is loaded, devoted, you postulate the rest, riding the seesaw, there's no law that I have ever met, I'm just a flat punk, on dead junk riding a vanguard, cut from the vaunted, I'm haunted til death do us part" View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 13, 2007    Reads: 45    Comments: 5    Likes: 0   


They say that nothing matters,

And that your life is mine

They'll set your broken jaw back

Anethetise

I drain the fluids from you

Devoted to the trial

I'll dig your weeping wounds

For messages

Then I feel a pull and posture

A simple psychophant

The dour rain comes falling

On my head

But I never called you out

I never ran you down

I never loved you like I love the hurt

I draw the dawns sweet picture

I caracature in blood

No other vaunted pleasure

Would be enough

To whip sway the dirty moments

Born within my head

A lukewarm reception waiting

By my bed

But I never asked for that

And I never said I would

A man caught between the breeze

And falling leaves

I should have believed

In me.

 


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Comments:

Wicked! In a GREAT way!!! Time to be a fan, huh? I meant to do this awile ago. This tops it. Thanks!

Posted: Jul 13, 2007

Author Comment:

Wow! Thankyou - I do feel creative again after being away for a while. Im glad you enjoyed, and thankyou again for the encouragment!

Typical Meth! Excellant, as usual. Keep up the great work :)

Posted: Jul 14, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks Dmonik - good to be back!

Missed your writings here Meth...this was absolutely twisted and I loved it..
A man caught between the breeze

And falling leaves

I should have believed

In me.

Brilliant. 5 stars...missed you and Dawn!

Posted: Jul 14, 2007

Author Comment:

Aww - thanks leesah, it's good to be back, better to be missed! I'm feeling creative again, which is a miracle given how much I'm working right now! Hopefully I'll be posting some more thoughts soon. Thanks for your support!

Loved it! Rock on!

Posted: Jul 15, 2007

Author Comment:

Ha ha, thankyou!

I love the line "I should have believed in me" it's so true for so many. This poem is awesome!!

Posted: Dec 10, 2007

Author Comment:

Cool, thankyou. I was having a self doubting moment! Thanks for taking time out to read and comment. Jim.



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