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Poem By: Methelusa
Poetry


This tells the story of a parent who loses a child.How is left upto you. Originally a song, but I feel it works as poetry too, after all, a song is just a poem with music. Bit disturbing if you picture it how i did, so approach with caution. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 12, 2007    Reads: 78    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


 

I'm waiting by the car, waiting to go home,

You're sitting on the stairs, waiting by the phone

I'll be late home from school, I'm telling on you all

Sitting on the stairs, waiting by the phone.

And woe betide me, a day in your life

My face reflected, in the blade of my life

My life.

'Cos I'm running home from school, I'm going to the park

I'm staying with a friend, and playing after dark,

Now I'm drowning by the starlight, no-one can hear my calls

Sitting on the stairs, waiting by the phone

Woe betide me, a day in your life

My face relected, by the blade of your knife

Your knife.

Now you're living on your own, and watch the kids walk home in twos

You're ironing the clothes, I used to wear for you

Your sipping on your drink, driving to the ball

And checking in your home, for a photo of us all

And i remember, a day in my life

Your face reflected by the blade of knife

My knife

So I'll always be playing with the dog, and begging to stay out

Cheating on the test, and hiding in your doubts

I'm riding on your dreams, the ones that keep you up

Sitting on the stairs, waiting by the phone

Waiting by the phone for me.


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I love the song version. Hats off.

Posted: Feb 12, 2007

Author Comment:

Yeah, wish there was a way to put the music up too!

Maybe the music has got in the way of this one?

Doesn't flow like the others I read recently.

But. A 5! I'm off to the next...and the next....

Posted: Feb 19, 2007

Author Comment:

Probably an astute comment, whenever I have played this song live it elicits strong emotional response from audiences. I think it loses something rhythmically in poem form, there are some sutained notes and bridges which, unless you know, just don't translate as I wouldve liked.

This is definately one of my favourite self-penned songs though.



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