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When I Think

Poem By: Methelusa
Poetry


I happily remember some lost close friendships from my college days. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 3, 2007    Reads: 52    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


I say it now, I've said again,

When will all, all this end?

When I cried, I cried for you.

I want to know, do you cry too?

Quiet inside, all of here.

Speak aloud, have no fears.

Cut me up, burn me too.

Wither our forgotten love.

Next time, will be ok.

If we ever meet again.

If we do, stay good friends.

And I count on you until the end.

If we ever find the ways

To say what we want to say.

Then this will be all worthwhile.

When I think of you, I'll always smile.


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I like this one, because the rhythm again is like a song. Good stuff!

Posted: Apr 3, 2007

Author Comment:

Yeah, you called me on the songs! Thankyou.

I like this one. Well you commented my poem so I thought I should return the favor and hey, I found some I really liked. Thanks. Bye

Posted: Apr 5, 2007

Author Comment:

Thankyou, always appreciated.



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