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An old erotic poem that I found that I thought some of you would like to read. I hope. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 22, 2008    Reads: 262    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


Bodies entwined
as we lay in this bed,
desire burning as out lips taste each others flesh.
Her firm breasts
under my eager hands,
such soft flesh to the touch.
Feeling her lips
moving down my chest,
lustful fires
devours my mind.
Her lips around my manhood,
suckling it so lovingly,
as she straddles her body over me.
Those forbidden lips
before my eyes,
while her actions intensifies my desire.
To taste the sweetness of her womanhood,
her muffled moans echoing around me.
Trying to hold back,
not knowing if I can.
The pleasure she gives me,
drives me on even further
with the lustful endeavours we do.
Till finally
the climax overcomes us,
drowning in the waves of ecstasy.
Our bodies sweaty and spent,
laying motionless
on one another.
That is
until we do it again.


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Comments:

Hey Michael! Great job! "Lustful fires devours my mind" this was my favorite line in this one and the ending got a laugh out of me. :)

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad that you likes it. Thanks for the comment my friend.

Hah, I loved this, very sensual and playful and I didn't expect the last line, made me chuckle! Great Job! ~ Nixie

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I figured the last line would make people chuckle. I always appreciate your comments my friend. :)- Mike

flows with heat and passion as one would expect with such an intimiate poem. Like Nixie I enjoyed the last line immensely.

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Anna. I really appreciate your comment.

intimate that is - never borrow me as your typist (particularly if some 69 poetry is in progress)

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment. I am glad that you liked it.

Why Michael68, when I saw 69 I knew it would be a hot read! Well, no disappointments to be found here;) Nice job.
~rain

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Rain. I am glad that you like it. Planning on writing more poem like that soon. :)



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