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Let Me Take You.....

Poem By: Michael68
Poetry


Tags: love

A poem for the woman who is not only my muse, but the one who has captured my heart. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 28, 2008    Reads: 47    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


I am a man of passion,
wanting to give you
all that is within my heart, fair maiden.
Letting my words
touch you so deeply,
arousing.... penetrting your heart
like never before.
To send you on a journey
to a paradise made for two,
away from the worries and pain
of this reality we live in.
I will give you the feeling
of being loved so deeply,
stronger than any other man has ever done.
Letting you know how special you are,
and how much my heart
longs for you.
Take my hand
and I will take you there,
where happiness fills the air
and the worries of the world
no longer exists.
Where lovers express their passion
under and innocent moon,
and the angels watch smiling
as they sing out
in joyious glee of the love we share.
Let me take you there,
a journey within the heart.


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Comments:

*sigh* I think someone has well and truly inspired you lately! Such a touching read it literally has my heart sighing with me, so honest and sensual. It's just what a woman loves to hear! Lovely work Michael. ~ Nixie

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Nixie. I really appreciate it. I wasn't sure if this was that good. But it's what I feel for this woman. :)

hi! mikey. romeo is deep in love with juliet to sing love ditties. please find a cure or v may not see u any more for u r taking her to paradise. lucky juliet. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks you bubbly. But even though I may take my Juliet to paradise, I will always be here for my friends. To share my poetry, friendship and comment on their work. I will always be here for you and all the other friends I have made on this site. Thanks for the sweet comment. It means a lot to me. :)



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