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Love's Paradise

Poem By: Michael68
Poetry


Tags: love

For a special woman that I fell in love with. My darling Juliet. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 21, 2008    Reads: 42    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


You are always in my dreams
as well as the thoughts in my mind.
A smile so warm and kind,
such beauty almost impossible to find.
 
Let me take you away
to a paradise all our own.
A place where our love will stay
while the world's troubles melt away.
 
Let reality disappear from our sight,
leaving us in our own lover's paradise.
A place where our hearts fill with such delight,
as we dance slowly through-out the night.
 
So take my hand and let me take you there,
enveloped in a love so intense for us to share.
My fair maiden let me feel your kiss,
that will bring us to love's paradise
and eternal bliss.


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Comments:

hi! mikey. wow. u did transport me to a world of my own, especially with the line, "Let me take you away
to a paradise all our own." she must be a very very special person for u to write so deeply. but u deserve all happiness and love. may this one be ur soul mate. mikey, i'm so happy for u.

when i read about ur divorce, i was sad but this is pure bliss. may u never come out of it. and enjoy all the life's blessings together with juliet.

thanx for inviting me for a read or else i don't know when i'd've read this lovely poem. i had visited ur page earlier too but u've gone into erotica (short story). but keep it up. i like this very much. mostly, i'm happy for u. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Bubbly. I feel so great that I found someone so special. I am glad that you like it. :)

Aww, that was so lovely and sweet. What a romantic tribute to her, will she get to read this? A great job Michael. ~ Nixie

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Nixie, I am glad you like it. She is going to read this soon. Thanks for the comment. I really appreciate your comment.

This was so touching, she sounds very special. Thanks for sharing this with us Michael! ~ KB

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

I really appreciate your comments KB. I am so glad that you like it and yes she is very special to me. :)



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