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Submitted: Feb 25, 2008 Reads: 542 Comments: 6 Likes: 3
I pray for peace,
to tired to fight.
Minds lie heavy
on death tonight.
The God's are angry
they have a right.
Have we lost all respect
for our God given life?
Are we no longer humane
have we all gone insane,
on a hot summer's day
do we pray for blood
instead of rain?
In the hands of God
there sits his angels.
In the hands of the angels
there lies a dove
with her wings outstretched
she sends her love.
In life we often hurt the one's
we love, and we wish for our
death to be a happy ending.
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Michale this is a sad and well written poem, surprised it "escaped" with not much fanfare. Well done
Posted: Apr 4, 2008
Sorry for typo with your name, not intended.
Posted: Apr 4, 2008
this is soo crapp!!
Posted: Jun 18, 2008
beautiful words .x
Posted: Nov 24, 2008
Beauty is sorrowful. I love it. :)
HopeXP
Posted: Nov 25, 2008
Nice work, have we all gone insane, hmmm makes me wonder. At times I think we have. Not to pick your work apart but I think you may have a typo. I think you mean humane, unless humaine is a word perhaps I don't know, and that is indeed what you meant. Just wanted to give you a heads up on this because when I read it made the flow stop when I got to this word. Okay, well another great poem, I'll stop ranting.
Take Care
Posted: Dec 2, 2008
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