Write me a poem...

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Poem By: Michael T Ingram
Poetry

Tags: poetry, bravado, love, excitement, angels

A short, relaxing poem I wrote for Helium.com last year; and tho't I'd share it here! View table of contents...

Submitted: Feb 1, 2007 Reads: 780 Comments: 10 Likes: 2

Write me a poem, a story of love,

a tale of an angel sent from above.

A ravishing beauty, with eyes burning bright

filled with a love for me at first sight!

Write me poem of boldness and wit,

of dangerous places and men who won't quit...

a tale of great deeds, and passion unbound -

a story of heroes, and men of renown!

Write me a poem straight from your heart,

give it an ending, a middle, a start,

Make the end happy as all ends should be -

write down a poem and send it to me.

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Comments:

Dawn Prest

Very beautiful and moving. Almost romantic. I really enjoyed it. Well done!

Posted: Feb 1, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you very much, Dawn...I wish I could do as well with my books!
-Michael Ingram

Freckles

AMAZING! This was truely one of the best I've read...I give you 5 stars!!

Posted: Feb 1, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you, Freckles - that is high praise indeed! I'm not sure I deserve it, but I certainly appreciate it!
-Michael Ingram

Author Comment:

I'm glad...

leesah

This is smooth and you're right, relaxing! Nice flow...great poem.

Posted: Apr 3, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you, Leesah...comments like yours make writing SO rewarding!
Take care...

A Stranger

Your words match the smooth flow of the Mississippi on a hot July day.

Posted: Apr 4, 2007

Author Comment:

Why thank you - I never received such a poetic compliment before!

air

just wonderful! so glad I came across this. thankyou

Posted: Sep 23, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks!

You could stop by my website...ServeJesusForReal.com
There's a LOT more there like it, and some kool Judaic music, too!

Should you stop by, please dsign the guestbook before you leave...I LOVE to know when someone stopsa by, particularly if they've enjoyed themselves!

If you can think of any way I could IMPROVE on the site, leave those suggestions there, too - and I'll work on what you want as soon as possible!
- Mike Ingram

EdwardJBradleySr

Michael T Ingram:

Most effectively well written. Enjoyable and entertaining as well. The rhythm sounds familiar. Liked it.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Oct 6, 2007

Author Comment:

Ed, the rhythym sounded familiar to ME, too, although I'm not sure why...I read a LOT, so maybe I was borrowing a style from somewhere else...it's NOT my usual style, for true.

Thank you for your kind evaluation.

John Bradreth
(not registered user)

Wonderful poem with excellent adjective. Makes me think of a book, "Tess of D'Urvervilles", by Thomas Hardy.

Posted: Nov 18, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you...I was feeling kind of happy that day, and it may have shown. I don't know Thomas Hardy, or the book, but love to read, so I will probably get a copy and check it out.

Thanks again!