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An Undying Love

Poem By: Midriffkitty
Poetry


This is another poem that I wrote. My way of letting go. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Nov 8, 2007    Reads: 68    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


You were full of life
You were strong
Enough, for the both of us
Your enthusiasm
Waded inside of me
You were the refreshment of my life
You were everything that I wanted to feel
I got in so deep
I never realized that I had fallen
But my subconscious knew…
That I would
 
Falling for you felt above this world
Every minute with you was bliss
I couldn’t imagine love without you
You were the only one I wanted
I surrendered my heart to you
Tear it or embrace it
It was yours
 
Now you’ve forgotten yourself
You’ve abandoned what matters most
The gleam of laughter in your eyes that used to be,
Replaced with a shade of exhaustion and fatigue
You’ve put happiness aside
But what is life if you are not happy to live it?
Or to just be
 
If I had all the wealth of the world
I’d serve it to you
In hopes that happiness would prevail in your heart
And if I am good enough for you
I’d hope that you’d embrace me
Bind me to your soul
For I have always been here
I’ve always been at your door
Through the good and the bad
Waiting for you
And waiting for you to realize who I am
And that I would never let you go
Because I have an undying love for you
 
There’s just something about you
That has taken me in
To love you unconditionally,
I will
Even if I am not the one
Who will lie next to you at night
And reign your heart
Even If I am not the one who will vibrate passion
Through the love that we make
Because only one thing matters to me…
Your happiness…
 
Even if I have to give up my own
And drown in heartache
It is to ensure…
Your happiness
 
Now tell me…
Who do you fancy would love you this way?
 
 


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Comments:

Awesome work. I really enjoyed this. Well written. I wish you well and God Bless. Lisa

Posted: Nov 8, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will have more of my work published on this site. I have so much to say these days.

Very, very lovely, indeed! I wish everyone could feel this kind of passion at least once in their life, even though it usually leads to heartache, however, as the song goes..."Without a hurt, the heart is hollow." Beautifully expressed... beautifully written.
Thanks for sharing...............Jerry

Posted: Nov 9, 2007

Author Comment:

I'm glad you liked my thoughts. Thanks for reading :)

'Those who have only loved once are really the ones who are shallow'

That was very emotional. How could a man benumb himself of such love?

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. How you ask? Well a lot of men are ignorant of what is around them, particularly to emotions. This man that I wrote about just didn't know how much of myself I could really offer to him and he kicked himself for it when I finally made him read this. But this man is complicated haha, but I know he's not the only one to be.



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