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Red and Black

Poem By: mike folley
Poetry


This is the result of SeeSawMae's challenge that was presented to me. I responded as quickly as I could so I hope it's ok for it. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 3, 2008    Reads: 32    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Red and Black

There are two parts to me,

One which I must destroy.

I have a darker side that chases me,

I hope to lead it into my ploy.

 

I am a good soul,

I will do my best,

To save you from my dark side,

Who’s pursuit gives me no rest.

 

But in order for me to take it down,

There’s a path I do not like.

For I must follow into my darkness,

For me to be able to bring it to the light.

 

At first I thought there was a way,

For my black to be set afire.

But I see the side I wished to save,

Faded away and turned into mire.

 

Once I had been given a small lick,

Of the power that it promised me,

I knew I couldn’t resist the chance,

To someone more respected be.

 

When it is brought upon me,

And there comes a decision I must make.

Trust not the liar telling you this,

But you believe the road of righteous, is not the one I take.


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Comments:

hi! mike. my god. so u've a darker side. interesting. but darker side makes u appreciate the good one. nice poem. ;-)

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

haha, Thanks, Darkness is the easiest to write about sometimes because many people feel it, just they don't understand it. The questions are what give me something to write about.

oops, i never commented on this! I'm sorry! well i'm commenting now, this is truly awesome, you are such an amazing writer, keep it up! i can't wait to come back and see what other things you have written. Take care!

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks, I do hope to hear from you soon. I will write little by little with the progression of the summer.



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