GAIN-LOSS

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Poem By: Milky way
Poetry

Tags: gain, loss, world, path

This poem is about forming a chain wherein each person tries 2 awaken the next one to d present scenario & ask them to peep into their own loss & gain. Since d world has become so selfish dat people do sumthng only when they r shown their own loss,hence this is d best way to gather masses for doing sumthng generous. View table of contents...

Submitted: Oct 5, 2008 Reads: 18 Comments: 2 Likes: 2

What have you gained from this world?

What have you lost from this world?

Come with me & join my hands,

lets unfold a new path.

Lets awaken this sleepy world & ask,

what have they gained from it & what have they lost???

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Comments:

Pratibha

Such a realistic poem..will mail my hubby to read this one...

honestly, people need to realise that in a moment everything is gone...why spoil the atmosphere with dirty thoughts...

lovely thoughts sweety....

thanks for sharing this with me...i loved it, beyond any words can express....

Posted: Oct 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks di, its ur love 4 me dat u hv given so encouraging comment....otherwise I know its nt a great thing which i hv published......just felt like sharing dis thought & d best way is 2 pen down ur thoughts, even if there r only few lines......newys i am a person of few words, personally....heeheehee......

bubbly

hi! mw. i like ur idea of coming together and doing the conscious-raising. there'll always be a loss or gain. how about what we need and what we want and go for that. a human bonding is always required for the betterment of our world. u've only strengthened the concept with this inspiring poem. good work. lol. ;-)

Posted: Oct 26, 2008