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Is this good bye

Poem By: MissGC
Poetry


Tags: lost, loss, sad, hurt, under, moid

im kinda lost right now dont know what to do so im talking to myself through writting. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 20, 2008    Reads: 82    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


I never wanted to admit that I’d grow up

I never wanted us to fall apart

when you tell me I did something I didn’t do

it makes me wonder why I bother,

I think back to high school

never was an easy time

but we always seamed to laugh

still the same as we hurt and grew

never a hard time

never a hard time spent with you

but now I realize that was the past

I look to my past but don’t see you in my future

I never lied to you

about things you accused me of doing things I didnt

I don’t wanna miss you

but it’s the only way.

Hopefully its better this way

I never wanted to admit that I’d grown up

I never wanted this to tear us apart


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Comments:

Very nice. I like the line "I never wanted to admit that I´d grown up" It´s so true... at least for me, that thought crosses my mind rather often. Very descriptive. I like

Posted: Apr 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you growing up is hard when you've always been a kid at heart

Nice job. I can really feel your words in it.

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks glad some one can relate



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