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Five Senses

Poetry By: MissJoker13
Poetry



a poem about the sense, in a beautiful lake.. but the lake bit doesn't really matter...

lemme know what you think!


Submitted:Mar 9, 2009    Reads: 5,482    Comments: 18    Likes: 14   


I see ripples floating on the pond

Tiny perfect circles of lifelessness

I wonder if I could be so peaceful?

As the advancing tranquil disturbances

I hear birds calling testimony

Through the boughs of trees so high

Could I ever sound so beautiful?

As the magnificent rantings

I taste summer pollen in the air

Shaken into a comatose journey

Could I ever taste so sweet?

As the flawless abominations

I smell fresh-rain ferns

Watered into a faultless death

Could I ever smell as good?

As these pleasant condemned

I feel pointed spheres of smooth

Pebbles settled silent under my hands

Could I ever feel as unflawed?

As this dreamlike pain





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