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Gloom

Poem By: misslyss
Poetry


something i found in my old notebooks.
the title explains it all. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 9, 2008    Reads: 29    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


Gloom is a dark, brooding cloud
fog hugs the earth;
Gloom seems to do the same.
shades of grey and blue
both possess
Gloom arrives in our lives to give us:

despair.
agony.

Gloom can be the ruin of our lives.
but when the sun peaks over the horizon;
the fog ceasts to exsist.
the light of Life is the same,
when it shines thorugh
our clouds of doom ceast to exsist
we gain:

Hope.
Guidance

Life gives us Light; even it the darkest corners.


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Comments:

Good, I'm glad to know you're a good poet too. I liked this piece, though I don't necassarily agree with it. Brilliant job.

Posted: Jan 9, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you :] I'm glad you liked it :]
i on the fence wether i like it or not.

Good, I'm glad to know you're a good poet too. I liked this piece, though I don't necassarily agree with it. Brilliant job.

Posted: Jan 9, 2008

SUN comes out after the thunderstorms.

Posted: Jan 9, 2008

Author Comment:

yes the sun does.
but when its a foggy morning, and when the sun rises the fog disappears, does it not?

You cannot truly enjoy happiness until you can learn about sadness.

MA

Posted: Jun 6, 2008



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