Trust in Myself

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Poem By: MissUnderstood
Poetry

Tags: relationship, trust, lonliness

Wondering how a relationship is going to work when you can't even trust yourself. View table of contents...

Submitted: Aug 13, 2008 Reads: 29 Comments: 2 Likes: 1

Only you.

The one I love.

Don't you see?

How ugly I really can be!?

I just lay and wonder...

How I deserve the most generous, wonderful guy.

Is this for real?

I just can't see how I statisfy?

Always angry, pushing you away.

Do you seriously do that to someone you love?

Can I ever actually trust anyone, when I can't even trust myself?

So confused.

Insecure.

How do you handle me!?

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Comments:

ReganFinch

Hey Miss :) Very personal and unique. I love how you asked your questions. It really drew me into it and made me feel like I was there with you. Great job! Take care, Regan

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked this one! I try and make it personal and make the reader have the same feelings too. I'm glad I got my point across. Thank you again!

francesca salit

I really liked this. It really showed all the emotions and it got down to the core, in just a few simple sentences. It was very good!

Posted: Sep 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. Most of my stuff is pretty full of emotions, sad emotions. Im glad you liked the way I put it together, I don't really follow any certain pattern... It just comes out and I usually like the way it goes together. Short and sweet is the way to go. Especailly when you get your point across... Thanks again!