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Shattered Mask

Poem By: MiyaviManson
Poetry


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Submitted: Aug 18, 2008    Reads: 19    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


He stares at the flawless porcelain

The love only he has, a hopeless wish

It has become a pleasure just to look at her

What else could a humane heart ask for?

 

Will he ever know?

The white mask has begun to crack

A voluntary act to make the pain last longer

The perfection in her face is breaking away

 

As the pieces shatter around

His pupils dilate to the sound of broken glass

The fog barely allows him to see

Everything he once refused to believe.


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Comments:

what a beautiful poem! the choice of words is perfect and i absolutely love the last stanza, especially the last line.
great work ^^ *thumbs up*
take care =]

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

you are a gifted poet i can tell poetry is ur calling its like your telling a story but in only a few sum of words

Posted: Nov 9, 2008



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