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Poem By: moggiedog
Poetry


I often wonder how the murderer of my child felt. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 14, 2008    Reads: 53    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


 Do you ever hear the cry
Of my child you watch die
Did you kneel by her side
At the moment when she died
Did you enjoy that powerful feeling
Of her life slowly leaving
What did you have to gain
Causing so much dreadful pain
Did you laugh and dance with glee
Enjoying taking my child from me
Or did you leave her still alive
Hoping help would soon arrive
Do you ever rue the day
That you took her life away
Or was it just another one
That you killed, just for fun?


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Comments:

very good :-)))

Posted: Mar 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Svetlana - thanks very much

Really puts the question across

Posted: Mar 14, 2008

Author Comment:

poewhit - thanks for taking the time to read and comment

Thanks you for sharing such heartfelt words. A meaningful read posing some meaniful thoughts about a tragic happening. Wishing you happier times.....Jerry

Posted: Mar 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you



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