Flowers of the future

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Poem By: moonwitch
Poetry

our blooming future haiku. View table of contents...

Submitted: Feb 23, 2008 Reads: 25 Comments: 6 Likes: 5

Seeds of yesterday

Grow the flowers of today

Our future in bloom

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Comments:

air

YES! Positive outlook and great haiku moonwitch! :)

Posted: Feb 23, 2008

Author Comment:

many thanks for the comment.

gerabel

Love the haiku!!! Very nice, Moonwitch! I wish the flowers were blooming now... I just received 11 inches of snow yesterday!!.....Jerry

Posted: Feb 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you I love the snow it makes everything look clean and fresh we dont get enough of it in england.

Twilightangel

So inspiring and lovely. Nicely done. I invite you to check out my profile sometime.~Twilight

Posted: Feb 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for your kind comment. I will check out your profile today.

rickyengland

Super Haiku! Past, present, and future compact in a neat poem. LIKE IT. Ricky.

Posted: Feb 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you kind sir. I am happy to know you like it.

Irwin
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Nicely executed Haiku one of the best so far on Booksie.

Posted: Feb 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much I am so pleased with your comment.

amateur01

one of the best haikus ive ever read :D

Posted: Feb 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work.

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