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Poem By: moonwitch
Poetry


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Submitted: Feb 17, 2008    Reads: 15    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


 
 
 
Pressure, pushing,
Enclosed, panic
Silent, alone,
Afraid, manic
Pulsing, throbbing
Tears,
Fears,
Flashing lights,
No one hears,
Vomiting,
Pain,
Bloody migraine
Not again!!!


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Irwin
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If you've read mine you'll know I appreciate this one .Great stuff.

Posted: Feb 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you it's a pain you can only appreciate if you suffer from migraine.

Thank you for welcoming me .Iam new in writing for people please you must comment on my writing.I love your poem it exactly how i feel sometimes and i happy to know someone feel like me.I think it just a say about migraine because when i feel sad i get all the thing you wrote down.

Posted: Feb 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for your comments I appreciate that you took the time to read my work.



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