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Summer in Kilkee

Poem By: Mr Benn
Poetry


Holidaying in the West of Ireland can be an "interesting" experience as anyone who has visited there can confirm. Definately a "4 seasons in one day" adventure! Kilkee is in County Clare. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 30, 2006    Reads: 76    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


From George’s head to the Pollock holes

The wind blows hard and the water rolls

People struggle up the strand

Raincoats on, umbrellas in hand

Hats fly off across the beach

Always blowing out of reach

Hardy swimmers brave the sea

As darkness falls at ten past three

Across the sky thunder crashes

Out over the bay lightning flashes

Torrential rain rips thru’ the air

Girls try in vain to save their hair

All run like mad in search of cover

A distraught babe wails for his mother

Beach now deserted, sad, forlorn

Windbreaks abandoned, tattered, torn

Is this some freak storm from o’er the sea?

No, its just summer in Kilkee!


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Comments:

Excellent meter and rhyme. Ireland is one place I've yet to go and really hope to get there one day. Your imagery is beautiful .

Posted: Nov 30, 2006

Author Comment:

Thanks for reading and you comments violet

Beautifully evoked, great rhythm and excellent rhyming. Actually feels like the rhythm of walking round Kilkee on such a day! That mix between getting out for a walk, and wanting to get back into the warmth as soon as possible! Really enjoyed it, thanks.

Posted: Mar 21, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks for your positive comments bren.



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