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Silently Dying/Muriendo en silencio.

Poetry By: MssJenn

She killed he boyfriend because he broke up with her.

A/N: i wrote this many years ago for my Spanish Literature class, a poetry lesson. the professor didn't tell how to write an actual poem just to do it, to imagine a tragedy real or not (this is obviously not real) and to write a poem.
Well i wrote this but she didn't like it, "this is too short with no rhythm" she said. Nah i disagree i think this is a nice poem. i think i got a bad grade on that homework cause i refused to rewrite it. what can i say what i love: i love.

Silently Dying/Muriendo en silencio.

Submitted:Apr 18, 2009    Reads: 91    Comments: 8    Likes: 4   

Silencely Dying

In silence i whispered your name.

So silently, that I'm still waiting your reply

In silence you notice my love, so silently you kissed my cheek.

In silence i notice your anguish, your desires,so silently i gave you my soul

In Silence you saw into my soul. slowly you walked away.

So serene, so silently, so innocent, and evil.

There you are inert, without you.

With love, but without life.
Muriendo en silencio.

En silencion murmure tu nombre,

tan callada, tan serena, que aun espero tu respuesta.

En silencia notaste mi amor, tan callado me besaste la mejilla.

En silencio note tu angustia, tus deceos, tan callada te entregue mi alma.

En silencio viste mis alma, y con tranquilidad te alejaste,

tan cereno, tan callado, tan inocente y malvado,

estas ahy inerte, sin ti,

con amor pero sin vida.


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