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Not Worlds Apart

Poem By: much2say
Poetry


The horrors of war are closer than we think. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 18, 2007    Reads: 190    Comments: 5    Likes: 0   


A comfy sofa

Wide screen TV

You may well look

But do you see ?

 

A dark dusty road

A mother is crying

In her arms

A baby is dying

 

A comfy sofa

Wide screen TV

Its time for Eastenders

Sunday at three

 

The houses are gone

Just rubble is left

A shoe in the road

A family bereft

 

A comfy sofa

Wide screen TV

What will you watch?

As you, eat your tea

 

Mass graves are dug

The bodies piled high

No time to grieve

As more victims die

 

A comfy sofa

Wide screen TV

The film was crap

And they charged a fee

 

Look at your neighbour

Her down the street

A warm friendly smile

Each time you meet

 

Imagine a time

If you could

When you murder your neighbour

In sheer cold blood

 

Her religion is different

Her colour the same

To let her live

Considered a shame

 

It could happen here

Like it happens there

Only it’s not on TV...

Its you and me

 

Stop the slaughter

Before it can start

Lives are to live

Not tear apart


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Comments:

honest, emotive, truthful.

don't let anything stop you writing. you're talented, and that's what the site needs ^_^

Posted: Jul 18, 2007

Author Comment:

Oh my god!!!! Thats the best thing anyone has ever said to me!!!! thank you so much

This was very eloquantly written, i really enjoyed reading it. Well done 5/5

Posted: Jul 18, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you for your kind words, theyve made my day!

I absolutly love this. It's deep, emotional, has good rythm, and it's truthful. Keep up the writing.

Love ALways,
Erin

Posted: Jul 18, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it x

it's good. it's got rythm. well written. deceptive in language, but the words are well chosen.
nova

Posted: Jul 18, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks for taking time to comment

much2say:

Well written. Good choice and treatment of theme. Liked it. A lot. There but for fortune and/or the Grace of God go you or I...

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Jul 18, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks. and so true.



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