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A FAIRIES CRY

Poem By: mum55
Poetry


i SAT LOOKING AT ONE OF MY FAIRIES AND THIS IS WHAT I THOUGHT View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 22, 2008    Reads: 59    Comments: 9    Likes: 4   


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White unicorn, above the clouds,
Carrying a fairy all forlorn,
Her wings so tall graced like silk,
Blowing freely as her will,
Hair long and golden, blowing free,
Side saddle she sits, green gown to her feet,
Face that hides a shadows cry,
Oh sweet unicorn above the sky
Tell me why a Fairy cries?
 
It was there wish to banisher her,
From brooks and flowers and wishing stones,
To fly the skies from this day forth,
Till the new moon shines for them once more,
Fairies grant but one small wish
Tricked by devilment and disseverment
This fairy I carry on my back
Demolished the new moons,
 
Without the new moons the fairies perish
For strength and life are drawn from them
So this fairy on my back which cries
Searches high and wide with in the sky
For the New Moons she demolished
To reappear then she must die


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Oh...marvelous work...breathtaking and clear

(PS Suggestion: Nix the hot pink and blue)

JoKa
Evelyn

Posted: Jan 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Evelyn....not quite sure what you meant about mixing the blue aand pink.....but have taken youe advise hope its what you surgested.....God Bless Juliet (loved you poem)

amazed by you instresting and colorful writing. Keep up the great work...check out my profile sometime~Twilight ^^

Posted: Jan 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Twilight thanks for the great comment the only thing is i am now writing a mini fairy tale story and have included you in it i hope ot post it in 1st Feb, if you get time maybe you might give it a read....til later Juliet

Captivating

Posted: Jan 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Poewhit thanks for reading and i hope you don't mind but i am writing a fairy tale story at the moment and have used you as one of my characters, posting it on 1st Feb hope. take care Juliet

i loved your poem. isn't it amazing the things that give you inspiration to write.
be well
snow

Posted: Jan 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks snowbelle and just to let you know i am writing a mini fairy tale story and you are one of the main characters,(Fairie)so hope you get time to read it i hope to post it on 1st Feb.......til later Juliet

very, very nice, Juliet. One of your best. I think Evelyn (Joka) meant when she said "to nix the blue and hot pink"... to do away with it and just have it in the normal black and white. Happy writing!!!.....Jerry

Posted: Jan 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Jerry thanks for letting me know have changed it now but just thought you should know i am writing a mini fairy tale and yes your one of the main characters (being a little boy of cause) should be posting it on 1st feb hope you get the time to read it till then happy days Juliet

Juliet :) Amazing how this all came to you, wow!
one day you amy want to try your hand at childrens stories. you ever think of it?

Posted: Jan 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Katie Ok! you have put the idear into my head so i have started to write a mini fairy tale but the chatacters are some of our budding booksie writers, You being a main character as a little girl though should be ready for Feb 1st time permitting.......hope you get the time to read it Til later love and peace your freind Juliet

Its funny how we can recieve inspiration from some of the most random things in life! It was a very great and creative write! I like it a lot! I love your writings!

Posted: Jan 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou Brown Skin for your great comments on my writing and this poem I have now started to write a mini story including some of Booksie writers as the characters so if you feel you have the time to read it i am hopefully putting it on Booksie on 1st Feb, and i have to say i enjoy your writing too...take care Juliet

I can't wait to read it!!

Posted: Jan 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks.

I thought this was wonderful. I love unicorns and fairies, but would have never thought to write such a great poem about it. Loved it.

Posted: Feb 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou so much for your nice comment may be you might like to take a look at wishing land thats a fantacy story with booskie writers as charaters......Take care Juliet



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