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INNOCENCE IN BODY AND MIND View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 7, 2008 Reads: 52 Comments: 6 Likes: 5

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Well, this one is good.
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
ah, so well done Juliet!
very beautiful and oh so touching!
~katie :)
Posted: Jul 8, 2008
hi! juliet. this poem reinforces the belief in "the innocent and the beautiful have no enemy but time”. awesome read. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
Nice work Juliet, check out Orange juice kiss.
Posted: Jul 12, 2008
i always think i should have had a remote control and then i would have pressed the 'pause' button and my son would stay as a child with me forever and ever...
This innocence and lovely gestures....i will miss them ...
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
Your poem is absolutely riveting...tears ran down my face. Perhaps because I'm a mother or because I lost my innocence so long ago.
Posted: Aug 10, 2008
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