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CHILD WITH SUCH INNOCENCE

Poem By: mum55
Poetry


INNOCENCE IN BODY AND MIND View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 7, 2008    Reads: 52    Comments: 6    Likes: 5   


Look into my twinkerling eyes
Capturing you, mesmerising you,
What do you see?
Innocence and youthfulness
Dreams of love yet to come,
The light it glistens and reflections shine,
As you look into my glass starry eyes,
 
Only a child with such innocence
Soft skin like silk and full of grace,
Lips so sweet for one so young
Nose of pure delicacy for there are no flaws yet in this face,
Just youth and beauty which shines and gleams
 
Yet in my eyes are empty dreams,
A longing for what might have been,
For I will never know my fate
Because life has taken me,
To another place,
To stand with other angels full of grace,
 
But don’t be sad that I have gone,
Just look into my eyes
Then it is there you will know that I once belonged,
Within your heart and I have not gone.


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Dusan Gojkov
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Well, this one is good.

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for your kind comment

ah, so well done Juliet!
very beautiful and oh so touching!
~katie :)

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Katie, Thankyou for your lovely comment hope you enjoyed your walk the other night and life is sill treating you well, and it is not too hot, we are having some nice weather here at long last, life's preety boreing at the moment just can;t wiat to have my opp,.....and get life back to normal....sweet dreams and los and lots of happiness and good luck wished for you my freind love and peace always juliet

hi! juliet. this poem reinforces the belief in "the innocent and the beautiful have no enemy but time”. awesome read. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Bubbly you are so right in your comment hope your well and keep smiling will catch up with your work. happy days to you Juliet

Nice work Juliet, check out Orange juice kiss.

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Brain thankyou for your kind words and enjoyed Orage juice kiss Take care enjoy the sun juliet

i always think i should have had a remote control and then i would have pressed the 'pause' button and my son would stay as a child with me forever and ever...

This innocence and lovely gestures....i will miss them ...

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Pratibha,
Our children grow but our love grows with them and all they acheive as they grow, and the love we carry grows stronger and memories never ever fade....smile for it is a big wide world for him to discover but you will always be the apple in his eyes love to you both juliet

Your poem is absolutely riveting...tears ran down my face. Perhaps because I'm a mother or because I lost my innocence so long ago.

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thankyou....juliet



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