CHILD'S PLEA FOR A MOTHERS LOVE

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Poem By: mum55
Poetry

Tags: mother., love., deaf., tears., prayer.

A YOUNG CHILD'S PLEA FOR A MOTHERS LOVE View table of contents...

Submitted: Jan 8, 2008 Reads: 193 Comments: 4 Likes: 2

MOTHER

Mother take my hand I beg

Lead me to where the good belong,

Mother Take my heart I beg

Don’t throw me away as I don’t belong,

Mother hear my cry I beg

Don’t let it fall on deaf ears,

Mother hold me close to you

Let me share the love I give to you,

Mother teach me right from wrong,

Or at least help me find the path,

To lead me to have a good heart,

Mother wipe my tears away

Don’t turn and look the other way

Mother hear my prayer at night

All I want is you to love me,

Is my plight.

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Comments:

Hi auntie .this is a direct respose poem to yours..the kinda of Mother your poem bought to mind ..

Mother dear Mother .
please,please don't use me as an ashtray.
Don't beat me with the well worn slipper
or throw my toys away.
Mother dear Mother. I know,I know,
My birth GAVE you pain .
but why do you have to GIVE it back.
again and again and again .
Mother dear Mother I still love you.
I'd tell you if I could .
but with these two fat lips and locked away
my voice can't penetrate the wood.

Posted: Jan 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Well Paul what can i say i laughed my head off reading this..... At least i know i am neither of these Mothers needless to say....are you still in wales...... and love to you today Auntie xx

boneman

Very well written, I find it moving for so many reasons... A child should not have to plead for a mothers love.

More soon please

Peace

Boneman

Posted: Jan 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Boneman your right about a child and love but some children don't ever feel a true Mothers love...it's such a shame..thanks for reading have a good day juliet

Jbortti

Beautiful! Mothers , good or bad are always mothers.

Posted: Jan 8, 2008

Author Comment:

I agree, yet good mothers make a happy home Bad mothers can lead there loved ones to stray and never know what a mothers love is like to show children of there own......But you are right always a mother......Have a great day juliet

indigo11roses

This poem was satisfying and sad in the same way, like when your ice cream cone goes SPLAT on the graying sidewalk. (Stange comparison, but it is true)
good job!

Posted: Jan 11, 2008