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ELUSION IN THE MIND

Poem By: mum55
Poetry


THERE ONE MINUTE GONE THE NEXT, THE POWER OF THE MIND View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 21, 2008    Reads: 60    Comments: 7    Likes: 5   


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I saw you a shadow in the past,
Memories surface, erased I wish they’d stay,
 
Pain and twisted forces battle in the mind,
You’re a memory of someone with a delusion mind,
 
Now Positive thoughts and strength,
Courage and determination,
 
Rise above a cowards twisted little mind,
Life’s a learning force,
 
Gathering strength along the way,
You’re nothing more than an elusion,
 
That entered destroyed me got in the way,
But thunderous storms break up and scatter wide,
 
Leaving  behind a bright array of blue skies,
Leading to these much happier brighter days,
 
I am lucky to leave this elusion
Where it’s bound to stay,
 
Deep and buried forever in the depth of my mind,

For life to me now is a ray of Sunshine alt


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Juliet, your writing gets better and better, 'The power of the mind' love this subject, writing has been like a nurturing to us huh? best wishes...katie

Posted: Feb 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Katie hope your well and the sun is shining on you today.... The mind is a wonderus thing and lifes to short to not enjoy it......peace and light your friend Juliet

Juliet I really like this. I understand how we can cling to such an elusion or darker undercurrents in our mind (and lives)but how with will and courage and resilience and prayer we can dismiss the elusion, as you say "break up" and "scatter" it "wide". Your ending made me smile.

Posted: Feb 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Anna Thankyou for your great comment and courage is a great thing and lifes to short now to be sad.....Til Later take care Juliet

The last line is so wonderful! The subject of the mind is such a great topic to write about, and you did a great job of it! :)

-Cathy

Posted: Feb 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou cathy for your nice comments takr care till later juliet

Great piece Juliet!

Posted: Feb 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Cheers Brian Hope Lifes treating you well Til Later Juliet

Juliet I liked this poem. The language and double meaning really appealed to me. I love the thought that all bad memories are just powerless elusions to the past. I look forward to reading much more of work and thank you for taking the time to read mine.

Posted: Feb 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Evelyn thankyou for your lovely comments and i agree the bad memories are poweles Til later take care Juliet

LOVED THIS ONE

Posted: Feb 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou miss mary and i hope you are well til later your freind Juliet

You always leave me so impressed! The minds ability to battle its own demons is immense. Great job!

Posted: Feb 26, 2008

Author Comment:

thankyou dragonfly glad you enjoyed this and thanks for the great comment have a great day juliet



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