For life to me now is a ray of Sunshine 

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THERE ONE MINUTE GONE THE NEXT, THE POWER OF THE MIND View table of contents...
Submitted: Feb 21, 2008 Reads: 60 Comments: 7 Likes: 5
For life to me now is a ray of Sunshine 
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Juliet, your writing gets better and better, 'The power of the mind' love this subject, writing has been like a nurturing to us huh? best wishes...katie
Posted: Feb 21, 2008
Juliet I really like this. I understand how we can cling to such an elusion or darker undercurrents in our mind (and lives)but how with will and courage and resilience and prayer we can dismiss the elusion, as you say "break up" and "scatter" it "wide". Your ending made me smile.
Posted: Feb 21, 2008
The last line is so wonderful! The subject of the mind is such a great topic to write about, and you did a great job of it! :)
-Cathy
Posted: Feb 21, 2008
Great piece Juliet!
Posted: Feb 22, 2008
Juliet I liked this poem. The language and double meaning really appealed to me. I love the thought that all bad memories are just powerless elusions to the past. I look forward to reading much more of work and thank you for taking the time to read mine.
Posted: Feb 22, 2008
LOVED THIS ONE
Posted: Feb 22, 2008
You always leave me so impressed! The minds ability to battle its own demons is immense. Great job!
Posted: Feb 26, 2008
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