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MY DAD AND ME

Poem By: mum55
Poetry


A young lady i know has now a strained relationship with her dad after a close bond of love because his found a New Love and his new love does not do families so this is written for her Smile Angela there are those who still love you View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Dec 31, 2007    Reads: 89    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   


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MY DAD AND ME

My Dad you’re just like a stranger
I seem to not know you anymore,
No so long ago I felt your love
It was beautiful and glorious
Yet now it’s been forgot,
 
I remember, your visits each week with love,
You gave me life and strength,
With you there I knew life would
Help me through the lonely days
You would catch, my tears I may shed,
 
I remember your ways,
My darling, you would call me,
Hug me tenderly
Oh how I long for those days,
 
Dad please where did you go?
I miss that dad I used to know,
The one I Have now makes me feel
Alone and that you don’t care,
 
I know you may love your new love
But somewhere in your heart
Please can you come to see me?
Laugh with me, Joke with me,
Be my Dad like it used to be
 
Please Dad don’t be a stranger to me,
Come give some love like it used to be.
My wedding looms yet without your love
I feel it’s not to be my dream day,
 
You know the one you used to say
Will be perfect in every way,
Please dad understand me when I say
I truly love you
Don’t be a stranger today or any other day, 
 
Please let’s share our love,
Together, for life’s so short,

For our hearts to drift away.

WHAT MORE DAD CAN I SAY.

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Comments:

A very moving poem, no matter how old you are you still need a parents love.

I hope your friend and father can work it out and they can both share the love they deserve.

A very well written poem.

Peace

Boneman

Posted: Dec 31, 2007

Author Comment:

Boneman thanks for reading and commenting on this i hope it works out for her too and your 2008 is a better year all round Juliet

what a moving poem. i hope your friend's dad sees the light and returns to being the loving dad he so obviously was. my parents are a long distance from me and i miss them very much but i know they would do anything for me..
all the best for 2008.
snowbelle

Posted: Dec 31, 2007

Author Comment:

Snowbelle heres hoping 2008 will be good for them and you happy new year and happy writing as well Juliet

Relationships can be so fragile, I can understand this happening Juliet, maybe your friend should post htis poem to her dad and await the reaction.
Regards Brian.

Posted: Jan 2, 2008

Author Comment:

HI BRIAN HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU HAVE YOU BEEN AWAY AS I HAVE NOT SEEN ANY WORK FROM YOU FOR A WHILE. I DID WRITE THIS SO MY FRIEND COULD SEND IT TO HER DAD i AM WAITING TO SEE IF SHE HAS TAKE CARE HAPPY WRITINGS FOR 2008 JULIET



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