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Submitted: Feb 15, 2008 Reads: 66 Comments: 9 Likes: 4
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This is a good one, it reminds me of something I've been quoted on before...Make everyday extraordinary.
Posted: Feb 15, 2008
Great piece of work Juliet!
Posted: Feb 16, 2008
Very, Very Good Juliet! I think this is one of your best***** :) take care....love and peace...katie
Posted: Feb 16, 2008
Very good one ! You know how to express yourself.
Posted: Feb 16, 2008
nice work, Juliet. One of your better efforts! Happy writing.....Jerry
Posted: Feb 17, 2008
Excellent write Juliet.
Personally I like to get off the path evey now and again and emerse myself in the dense thicket .It's there where the Truly unknown resides.
Posted: Feb 18, 2008
Oh this is beautiful! It has kind of a dreamlike quality to it that is so wonderful. Love this poem!
Posted: Feb 18, 2008
Yay! Another excellent poem!!! Keep writing, I'm enjoying these. This almost reminds me of The Road Not Taken (Robert Frost), only brighter and not quite as solemn :)
-Cathy
Posted: Feb 20, 2008
great work. loved it!
Posted: Feb 26, 2008
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