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Submitted: Apr 1, 2008 Reads: 60 Comments: 16 Likes: 11
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Who Is the voice inside ones head... The greatest question every posed.
I often wonder why human nature is to divide one self into two. Does it make it more justifiable or even logical to tear ones self apart and then pit the 2 halves against each other.
Surely victory and defeat are both certain in such a charade.One looses,one wins but there is only one.
Forgive ones self and the fight naturally ends.
Tell yourself that you are worthy of Love and love will embrace you.
Love and light
paul xxx
Posted: Apr 1, 2008
deep reflectioon-a little sad.
:)
Posted: Apr 2, 2008
Sad but nice Juliet
Posted: Apr 2, 2008
Achingly sad poem, Juliet. It hurts horribly when someone just refuses to see and understand what you're offering them. Hope writing it out made you feel better. I know it always helps me. Great job!
Posted: Apr 4, 2008
Asks many questions. I guess it deals with mens inability to listen, really listen. As a man I know I am guilty, so I can only apoligise for our fucked up slightly deaf species...
Posted: Apr 5, 2008
Hi Juliet!!! (SMILES)
'stars they twinkle, they see me' ;-) I love that part!!!
and then; 'tomorrows not here, yesterdays gone, this is my moment, I listen to your song' that line too :)
guess I missed this one...I see you must be busy these days Juliet? how is work? and how is life?
love and peace, katie :)
Posted: Apr 5, 2008
Written from the heart, very sad and your well written ending provides the reader with the answer to your questions.
Posted: Apr 5, 2008
A wonderful conversation between one's self and her conscience. We are our own friend afterall.. Sad poem juliet. But very well written! =)
Posted: Apr 6, 2008
You have moved me with fine poem.
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
Sad thoughts and reflections. But a beautiful read.
Posted: Apr 8, 2008
I'm speechless
JoKa
Evelyn
Posted: Apr 10, 2008
Oh Juliet. What if love does not find me????
I'll just go sob now.
Your poetry is always straight forward life. Here I am, like it or leave it attitude. Good job.
Posted: Apr 13, 2008
I wished they'd of turned around, because they would've seen just how lovely you are and what they'd lost. This is such a lovely, heart felt poem Juliet. Great read! ~ Nixie
Posted: Apr 15, 2008
Juliet... you have grown so much as a poet and writer since I first read some of your work. This is a "wonder-full poem ... a beautiful sadness, so to speak. Thank you for sharing this meaningful write. Rock on!....Jerry
Posted: Apr 16, 2008
Hi Juliet, so many times, i myself have gone through this.....so sad,,,,yes...for sure...
well written ...my vote and feelings goes to this one
Posted: Apr 26, 2008
Sorry I have just got round to this but what a fine poem I understand the feelings behind it.
Posted: Apr 28, 2008
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