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REFLECTION OF THOUGHTS TO ONES'SELF

Poem By: mum55
Poetry


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Submitted: Apr 1, 2008    Reads: 60    Comments: 16    Likes: 11   


Do you see me?
Do you hear me?
Or am I alone,
Do you understand me?
Or do you really care?
Will you break my heart?
When you’re gone and not there
 
Will I see rainbows?
Will I follow my dreams?
What if love does not find me?
Am I going to be left with empty dreams?
The Sun shines, the moon beams,
Stars they twinkle, they see me,
 
Tomorrows not here,
Yesterdays gone,
This is my moment,
I listen to your song,
Filling me with memories
Of where we used to belong,
 
I told you my secrets,
Did you listen?
Maybe not
For if you had
You would have turned around
Heard me and seen me,
In stead I fell apart,
All alone left with a broken HEART


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Who Is the voice inside ones head... The greatest question every posed.
I often wonder why human nature is to divide one self into two. Does it make it more justifiable or even logical to tear ones self apart and then pit the 2 halves against each other.
Surely victory and defeat are both certain in such a charade.One looses,one wins but there is only one.
Forgive ones self and the fight naturally ends.
Tell yourself that you are worthy of Love and love will embrace you.

Love and light
paul xxx

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Paul thankyou for your advise....and words of wisdom.....hope you well and life is treating you well...Lots of love Juliet (Auntiexxx)

Gendral Sulamani
(not registered user)

deep reflectioon-a little sad.
:)

Posted: Apr 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou for your faithfull comments as always take care Juliet

Sad but nice Juliet

Posted: Apr 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou Brian hope your well Juliet

Achingly sad poem, Juliet. It hurts horribly when someone just refuses to see and understand what you're offering them. Hope writing it out made you feel better. I know it always helps me. Great job!

Posted: Apr 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou so much Dragonfly for you kind comments :) take care Juliet

Asks many questions. I guess it deals with mens inability to listen, really listen. As a man I know I am guilty, so I can only apoligise for our fucked up slightly deaf species...

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Never mind Philip all men are diffrent....Still hope your well and lofe is being kind to you take great care love always Juliet (Auntiexxxxx)

Hi Juliet!!! (SMILES)
'stars they twinkle, they see me' ;-) I love that part!!!
and then; 'tomorrows not here, yesterdays gone, this is my moment, I listen to your song' that line too :)

guess I missed this one...I see you must be busy these days Juliet? how is work? and how is life?
love and peace, katie :)

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Katie, do wish i had more hours in the day to read Booksie , works ok it is a little boreing but hey its a job....how are you and whay is the weather like there.....Take care love and peace to you too Julietx

Written from the heart, very sad and your well written ending provides the reader with the answer to your questions.

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou once again Anna for your kind comments take care Juliet

A wonderful conversation between one's self and her conscience. We are our own friend afterall.. Sad poem juliet. But very well written! =)

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou for your kind comments take care Juliet

You have moved me with fine poem.

Posted: Apr 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou Terry Have a nice Day kind regards Juliet

Sad thoughts and reflections. But a beautiful read.

Posted: Apr 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou Whitehart..We all have bad days but they never last lond hope you are well and kind thoughts to you Juliet

I'm speechless

JoKa
Evelyn

Posted: Apr 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Evelyn was not meant to make you speachless but gl;ad you loke this.....Have a great Day and may the Sun shine for you Kind Regards Juliet

Oh Juliet. What if love does not find me????

I'll just go sob now.

Your poetry is always straight forward life. Here I am, like it or leave it attitude. Good job.

Posted: Apr 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Classy Peach you are so right nearly about my attitude know point in being someone your not have a nice day kind regards :) Juliet

I wished they'd of turned around, because they would've seen just how lovely you are and what they'd lost. This is such a lovely, heart felt poem Juliet. Great read! ~ Nixie

Posted: Apr 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Nixie all i can say really it was his loss not mine in the end.....hope you are well and thankyou for your continued surport and comments......enjoy your day till later take care Juliet

Juliet... you have grown so much as a poet and writer since I first read some of your work. This is a "wonder-full poem ... a beautiful sadness, so to speak. Thank you for sharing this meaningful write. Rock on!....Jerry

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Jerry sorry i have taken so long to reply but just had a week in Spain and the Sun never shone!!! still thankyou for you wonderful comment and have a fantastic day Juliet

Hi Juliet, so many times, i myself have gone through this.....so sad,,,,yes...for sure...
well written ...my vote and feelings goes to this one

Posted: Apr 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou once again for your heartfelt comment have a nice day til later Juliet

Irwin
(not registered user)

Sorry I have just got round to this but what a fine poem I understand the feelings behind it.

Posted: Apr 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Irwin thankyou so much for your great comment time is so limited now adays only get a couple of hours a week for Good old Booksie will catch up with your work as i like to keep up to date ....take care sunny days to you Juliet



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