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TEARS AND PAIN

Poem By: mum55
Poetry


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Submitted: Mar 22, 2008    Reads: 74    Comments: 10    Likes: 7   


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PAIN

Standing in a whirl wind,
Rain pours down, wind blows and howls around,
Spinning and crying, desperate, I fall to the ground,
Wet through out,
My Body shaking and shivering I think of you,
I look up through misty eyes to the sky,
Clouds and no sunshine,
Flowers wilting, Trees bear,
No tweeting Birds,
No Love for me anywhere,
A Heart that aches, a love which cries,
For someone who is not there,
More rain, hoping it will wash away this pain,
Of this feeling of never feeling love again,
I just keep crying, aching and praying,
That maybe one day,
Love will reign once again.

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Comments:

This poem aches with grief. I have known the sentiments you describe. Poignant but beautiful. Touching to me and wishing you better days.

Posted: Mar 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Anna Thankyou so much for your support and kind words ...take care yourself till later Juliet

I can feel the grief in this poem very moving and well written.

I hope for lighter days for you

Peace

Boneman

Posted: Mar 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you once again for your surport take care happy days wished for you and sun to shine till later Juliet

Emotional piece of work Juliet

Posted: Mar 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou Brian for your faithfull comments...take care :) till later Juliet

Juliet; this is to me similar to what i have been experiencing lately...eckhart tolle discribes this a the 'pain body' knowing this it helps me to overcome it better, by seeing it for what it is. I have to stay very alert so as not to allow it to take over...and it has not been easy, but it is getting better..or so I think LOl. best wishes, keep journaling and feeling, love/peace/light/ ...katie :)

Posted: Mar 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Katie just an off day....weather is terrible snow one day rain the next windy its quite depressing here at the moment in the UK roll on summer heres hoping we get one that is.....hope its not too bad with you and lots of Sunshine and Happy days wished for you...Love and Peace to you too till later Juliet

Nice poem needs a bit of formating but i love the emotion going on and the feel to it. Rated it "I liked it".
--Hoodling--

Posted: Mar 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for your comments and glad you liked it..take care Juliet

juliet what pain in this poem. you deserve love and happiness. i wish them for you.
take care
snow xx

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Snow thankyou for your kind words take care till later Juliet

a wonderful, "from the heart" write, Juliet. *****Jerry

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Jerry thankyou so much for your faithfull wonderfull comments take care :) Til later Juliet

this is really nice! very well written!

Posted: Mar 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou seesawmae...for your very kind comments take care juliet

This is so agonizingly sad. Hate it when I feel like that - hope everything is going better now. Great poem.

Posted: Mar 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Just an off day happy days are here again will catch up with you work......Take care till later Juliet

Gendral Sulamani
(not registered user)

wow-the grief is apparent-swirls around...beautiful.
:)

Posted: Mar 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankkyou for you great comment take care Juliet



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