
PAIN

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Submitted: Mar 22, 2008 Reads: 74 Comments: 10 Likes: 7

PAIN
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This poem aches with grief. I have known the sentiments you describe. Poignant but beautiful. Touching to me and wishing you better days.
Posted: Mar 23, 2008
I can feel the grief in this poem very moving and well written.
I hope for lighter days for you
Peace
Boneman
Posted: Mar 23, 2008
Emotional piece of work Juliet
Posted: Mar 23, 2008
Juliet; this is to me similar to what i have been experiencing lately...eckhart tolle discribes this a the 'pain body' knowing this it helps me to overcome it better, by seeing it for what it is. I have to stay very alert so as not to allow it to take over...and it has not been easy, but it is getting better..or so I think LOl. best wishes, keep journaling and feeling, love/peace/light/ ...katie :)
Posted: Mar 23, 2008
Nice poem needs a bit of formating but i love the emotion going on and the feel to it. Rated it "I liked it".
--Hoodling--
Posted: Mar 23, 2008
juliet what pain in this poem. you deserve love and happiness. i wish them for you.
take care
snow xx
Posted: Mar 24, 2008
a wonderful, "from the heart" write, Juliet. *****Jerry
Posted: Mar 24, 2008
this is really nice! very well written!
Posted: Mar 25, 2008
This is so agonizingly sad. Hate it when I feel like that - hope everything is going better now. Great poem.
Posted: Mar 28, 2008
wow-the grief is apparent-swirls around...beautiful.
:)
Posted: Mar 29, 2008
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