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TRUE LOVE DESTROYED

Poem By: mum55
Poetry


heart ache and pain are the remanins of true love when taken away View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 8, 2008    Reads: 75    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


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TRUE LOVE DESTROYED
 
I WATCHED YOU GO DOWN THE PATH,
Closing the door, I am falling to the floor,
My dreams in shatters, my love for you,
Dispersed in these tears I shed for you,
Heart wrenching and can hardly breathe,
For within these tears and pain, there can never be,
Another love, I loved like thee.
 
Curled in a ball falling and falling,
From the heights of love that you gave,
I know the memories, I will take to the grave,
Tears subsiding, heart still craving
For the loved we shared like before,
But I know now that it is not to be,
Because now you have left,  walked out the door,
Our loves destroyed and no more,


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Comments:

Oh Ya!!! you can really feel the pain here Juliet!
expression of reality shattered! hope it wasn't to hard writing :) katie

Posted: Jan 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Katie just letting old emotions have there say :) happiness in thoughts nowadays..... love Juliet as always...

Very true as to what happens. As you say now 'happiness in thoughts' thats good to hear.

Posted: Jan 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Miss Mary i really hope this year is good for you.....and thankyou for your wonderfull comments you give to me.....A broken Heart really never mend...... you learn to live with it ...... Yourfreind Juliet

What can i say ? "Sad but True" . Here again the love. Why it is so difficult to work with him ?
Great work!

Posted: Jan 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for your kind comments, these are feelings of a love a long time ago,...........Juliet

There are never any words to make the pain go away but writing helps purge the soul. God bless.....Jerry

Posted: Jan 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Jerry you are so right with those few words...Thankyou....Juliet



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