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a poem that's about a girl trying to find herself :D
i didn't finish it because it's supposed to be a song :P
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Submitted: Jul 4, 2008 Reads: 36 Comments: 4 Likes: 3
Discovering Me
I try to be everything I dream to be
All the different masks that I can see
Nothing seems to work
Nothing seems to spark
I'm hiding in the shadows
Hiding from the reality
Scared to find out who the real me is
Scared what I can truly be
Under all the faces in the crowd I see
a lonely face looking up at me
is that me?
can that be?
Is that who I really am?
Im finally discovering me
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i like it
realistic and emotive
i know the feeling
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Posted: Jul 4, 2008
this is so incredibly awesome for a song-I came up with my own little tune(I hope u don't mind) and I sang it out loud like five times to see how it would sound and work as a song-I know the style you girls have, so I went with that-and I think it is really great!!!....hope I hear it on youtube soon...u have great voices :D
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
Good poem with lots of emotion.
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
ouuu, i like i like. lots of emotion indeed. I really really enjoyed this!!!
Steph(:
Posted: Jul 14, 2008
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