Impossible

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Poem By: musicplayersMP
Poetry

if the poem is confusing it's about a girl wanting love but she first uses the shell as a symbol for the love she wants
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Submitted: Jun 20, 2008 Reads: 33 Comments: 3 Likes: 1

Impossible

A wave at the beach, I want to surf

I'm digging for shells shaped like a heart

I think, It's impossible...

I lay by the sand as the day gets older

Everyone starts leaving and I say

"It's Impossible"

Everyone is gone and the sun starts setting

I keep dreaming and wishing of that heart shell im getting

I guess it's impossible to find one..

I look at the sunset

And as I turn around, I see a heart shell

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Comments:

Prizemoney0135

Datz good, and a happy ending. And thankz 4 saying wat it iz bout in da summary, cauze i probably would've been confused, if ya didnt tell me. :)

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

haha i know :)

LeAnne

nothing is impossible, only waiting for you to find it.
Great poem by the way.
Keep up the good work!

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

xDDDDDDDDdd thank you~

pretty short in my opinion, you could have expanded the details and made us feel what she was feeling all the more.. other than that, this is a well written poem, with great imagery and good flow of words.. good work!!! =)

Posted: Jun 21, 2008