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Like me, Like me not

Poem By: musicplayersMP
Poetry


a song/poem that I wrote that describes my crush from the school year
it's really sad for me :( View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 16, 2008    Reads: 45    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


Like me, Like me not

We'd go to school

like everything is normal

you'd be with all your friends

and they'll look my way and smile

I thought you liked me

from all the things you did

deep down inside I know you're shy

that's why I stood around so high

You'd look at me and I'd smile

Who knew it wasn't worth the while

You started to avoid me

and I'd feel so sad inside

All the things you did

I guess they were all fake

I want to drop a pot

You like me, you like me not

I gotta move on

Whether you like me

or like me not

Now the school years over

and nothing happened

I guess it was your LOSS

whether you liked me or

liked me not


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Comments:

Awwwww so sad and sweet at the same time. I'm so sad that most of my friends are leaving. :( Oh well, that's life.

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

awwww :(
well it's ok :D
my poems are motivational i hope :P
:)
thanks for commenting! :D

This was so sad.Im sorry that that happened to you...But you wrote one great poem! :)

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

it's ok and thank you :D

Excellent.

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

this was venting my feelings about my crush into a poem :D

You took a sad time for you in your life,
and you put it out there in a work of art-to share with others, thats awesome!
~rain

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe thanks i was venting my feelings about my crush :(

this is really good and well written, but I truly tell you I've never heard the expression, 'drop a pot'-it sounds funny, not to be mean, but what does it mean?

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

oh it's not drop a pot i meant it as in i want to drop a pot on you (my crush) don't worry it's just a poem that venting my feelings :D



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