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a sad poem about me :( it's depressing i'm sorry but i wanted to vent my feelings :( View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 18, 2008 Reads: 56 Comments: 7 Likes: 4
Nobody is There
When I was small
I'd be so happy
but when the day ends
I'd be sad again
It felt as if the world had come to an end
as if nothing happened
I'd crouch next to the couch
and cover my ears
when the thunder roared
nobody was there to hug me
when I cried so hard
nobody was there to comfort me
why did i have nobody?
when my friends had everybody...
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i hate when i feel like theres nobody who cares about me enough to comfort me; it sucks realllll bad. this is good. and sadly, i like depressing poems the best. also, the last two lines were my favorite lines.
=)
~Lemon
Posted: Jun 19, 2008
You're not alone. God is with you.
Posted: Jun 20, 2008
Though parents and friends desert thee, the Lord will not desert you. I can't believe you are only 14 and writing such beautiful poetry.
Posted: Jun 20, 2008
thats how i feel sometimes too..
....but there is always some1 there for you
without you even realising it..
....
..thats what i've learnt
.x
Posted: Jun 21, 2008
i agree with anonymous..
on the other hand, the colours did not seem to match the feelings in the poem. i get the purple ones but the bright neon ones, to me, felt like it was out of place.. maybe try a much somber colour? just a suggestion.. all in all, great work!! =)
Posted: Jun 21, 2008
*sits in corner hugging knees* wow this is just...T_T...sadddddd!
what mood were you in when you wrote it?
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
A very powerful and moving piece of poetry.
~ô¿õ~
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
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