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Submitted: Jul 16, 2008 Reads: 48 Comments: 5 Likes: 3
Back to you...
Finding myself, easier said than done.
Walking this road with no Moon and no Sun.
I want to believe like I did before.
You make me wish and want somuch more.
Just take me away and hold me so tight.
Take me to see that new dawning light.
I willnever feel blue,
when I go back to you.
{This is for an old friend (Axel) (He's not dead) WhoI really miss.}
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hi! beth. u must be deeply in love at 13 to write such an in-love poem. it warms the heart and leaves me content. keep it up. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 17, 2008
Super cool! I really like it! Very romantical!!! :)!
Posted: Jul 17, 2008
WOW! That was goood :)
Loved the imagery...you're really talented when it comes to painting pictures in people's minds.
I also liked the way you didnt over-complicate a simple idea; it made the poem more effective,
Well Done!!
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
MuzikLover13:
Another good one. Gave it an "I Like It" vote.
Thank you for becoming a fan.
Will read your remaining postings. Will append with "I Like It" votes. Without commenting. Much of the time.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
this is really good, and i enjoyed it quite a lot! such a great poem with lots of emotion! :)
Posted: Aug 28, 2008
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