Why I’d rather be a girl like me.

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This poem is Based on me.
I really did go through all this and 'Those Girls'
made my life Hell for 7th Grade.
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Submitted: Jul 18, 2008 Reads: 50 Comments: 10 Likes: 5
Why I’d rather be a girl like me.
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You go, girl!
Loved every word because it is full of meaning and emotion...probably because it was real to you :)
Write more real-life stuff, it suits your talent and your style
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
thats really good and it does show so much emotion. your a really good poet hope to read more of your writing.
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
Rock On!!! Nice Job, that was a very cool poem! You go grl!
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
MusikLover13:
Good one! Gave it an I Like It" vote.
Yes! The teenage years can be rough. In school.
It would help if you were to skip a line between verses, if you intended there be more than one.
Some recommended changes:
Overlooked! That was me! Question: How can someone be overlooked and "picked-on"? At the same time?
They taunted me everywhere
Recommend reading and rating my posting of "Love Intended: #1, #2 & #3". The "comments" section explains my view of poetry and how it is best written.
Thank you!
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
I definitely can relate to this, Bethany, btw, I have always loved your name, in fact my little girl is named Tori Bethany...anyway your poem reminds me of my days in juniour high especially-high school is a little better, but it gets even better when your graduated-that's when your finally FREEEEE!!! from the idiotic judging and humiliation crap from the MEAN GIRLS,(one of my fave movies) BTW, I'm not that old(lol) :DDDDxXx
Posted: Jul 19, 2008
I like it because you just want to be yourself..I respect you for that.
Posted: Jul 19, 2008
hi! beth. three cheers to u. BE URSELF. BE BETH EVER! don't bother about them damn girls. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 19, 2008
Awesome poem.
LOVED IT
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Posted: Jul 20, 2008
Hey Beth :) Now this is what poetry is supposed to be: an outlet. This is awesome and I am glad that you were so honest! Take care, Regan
Posted: Aug 5, 2008
awe, this is soo good, expressing this in this manner. it's so good! yeah, just be yourself, and don't let these girls bother you, there's lots of love out there, and so many other people, don't let a couple of bitches get you down, it's so not worth it Smile! :)
Posted: Aug 28, 2008
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