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MY HEART IS SHATTERED

Poem By: Nadilyn and Lydian
Poetry


"Did you love me" "Did you even care, that you broke my heart with the force of a sledgehammer?" View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 11, 2008    Reads: 80    Comments: 7    Likes: 3   


My tears,                                                                                                                                                                                                            dropped silently onto                                                                                                                                                                                    the wooden floor,                                                                                                                                                                                         You said you love me,                                                                                                                                                                                   or do you? Did you?                                                                                                                                                                                      Did you pretend my love                                                                                                                                                                           was a worthless bauble that                                                                                                                                                                     could be thrown away?                                                                                                                                                                              Did you convince me                                                                                                                                                                                 with sweet words and chocolate                                                                                                                                                                   that I                                                                                                                                                                                                            was the only one in your heart?                                                                                                                                                                     Then why, did you walk away?                                                                                                                                                                Why did you crush my heart with                                                                                                                                                                 branding words, or rather                                                                                   silence?                                                                                                                                                                                                      Now I sit here                                                                                                                                                                                                  crying and moaning,                                                                                                                                                                                 wings clipped,                                                                                                                                                                                                         eyes red,                                                                                                                                                                                                          with my heart shattered into                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   into a thousand pieces.                                                                                                                                                                                         My heart that I can no longer                                                                                                                                                                      can pierce back together.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                My tears dropped silently                                                                                                                                                                                onto the wooden floor.

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Comments:

wow, you really dug deep for that one! I could feel the hurt and the anguish pouring out from your words! ~Em

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou! This means a lot to me since I'm new to this poetry thing. Thanks for reading!

I'm loving this! I can't wait to read more of your work!

Posted: May 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou!! And I as well love your writing. I really like your "Fear is Everywhere"!

I like how you started with

'My tears, dropped silently onto the wooden'

and ended with it too. Interesting poem but it makes me sad.

Posted: May 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankz! Coincidence, i just commented on your poems!! That's what it was directed for., Glad the results are positive.

hi! n&l. treacherous love. no use wasting ur precious tears over this. lovely sentiment. ;-)

Posted: May 28, 2008

Author Comment:

I actually agree. But of course, you don't feel that way when you experience it.
Thanx

I can relate to your poem. Though i never felt it(i've many friends who've gotten into this situation).Great poem:)

Posted: Jun 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou, although I've never been in the situation mentioned in the poem, but ahahaha, I don't plan to be either.

A great show of emotion. Love it

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou!

Lovely emotion and passion. Amazing! I love this.

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx! It took a long time writing this>_



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