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Beauty Lies Within

Poem By: Natane Alagua
Poetry


This poem is based on how people should see each other as being beautiful.
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Submitted: Sep 9, 2007    Reads: 53    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   



 

Dont judge beauty by the lust of the eye
Beauty is within though some may deny
Beauty is kind, honest and true,
Beauty is something deep inside of you
Ugly is the person that laughs and jeers
Ugly is the person that looks on and sneers


We all can be beautiful if we do each other right

 

Inner Beauty is warm and others will delite

 


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Comments:

Very nice....I liked the format and the rhyme scheme. Great job and keep up the good work!

Posted: Sep 9, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks for your comment, I really appreciate it

I liked the message in this little poem.
Very well written, flows good.
Good write : )

Posted: Sep 10, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks, I appreciate your comment, i hope that you will continue commenting and read more of my works



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